Showing posts with label Blog Critiques. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Blog Critiques. Show all posts

Monday, March 7, 2011

Catch Me If You Can Blogfest


  • It's blogfest time! Yippee-ki-yay! THANKS KRISTINA from KayKay's Corner for hosting this great blogfest!
  • I'm posting the beginning of an untitled work in progress of mine. It's a little vulgar in places, so please brace yourself!
  • Oh yeah, and it's a short story about a boy who sets out to teach a kid how to live a little, while discovering he's the one who doesn't know what it means to really "live." 

Martin’s fat. That’s why he won’t leave the house. I see him peeking out the blinds once in a while trying to get a taste of real life. He doesn’t get it though, not while he’s in there, where his mama’s greasy fried chicken probably uses up all his taste buds. I’ve even seen the kid, his arms folded on the basement’s window ledge, watching the shoes of us uninhibited pass by, wondering where we’re headed. He’s a dreamer, all right, in a pathetic way. I’m just the type of guy who can’t stand people who dream about things they never have the guts to do. Don’t ask me why.

I ring the bell at the Shelley house. Martin’s robust mama opens the door. She’s holding a glass of lemonade like it’s her lifeline. On a hot day like today, I’m surprised she made it to the door so fast. Through the screen I see a bead of sweat slip down between her breasts.

“What you doing here, Stan?”

“Is Martin home?” I ask out of politeness. Of course, Martin is home. I see him chicken dancing into the kitchen. I know it’s the kitchen because my house, the nicer one across the street, is just like theirs. Same layout and everything. 

Martin glances around the doorframe. With his body half hidden like that, he almost looks regular sized. Too bad he’s not. In another life we might have been amigos. That’s the word for friend in Mexico. Maria told me so last night when we were watching the stars in the bed of her father’s old Chevy. Amigos. I like the way the word rolls off my tongue.

  • Thanks for stopping by! Want to join in? Click here!!!!!!
-Rane

Monday, February 21, 2011

BLOGFEST for writers!

I've copy and pasted this info from Kristina's blog at KayKay's Corner. Please check out this AWESOME blogfest happening over there. I've linked up, and I hope you do too!!!

We've all heard it a millon times: If your book doesn't catch the agent/publisher's eye quickly, they'll probably reject it. So, I'm sure at one time or another we've asked ourselves, "Does my WIP catch people's attention right away?"(I sound like that voice-over guy from every infomercial ever made.)

The rules are pretty simple.

1.) Sign up on the Linky below so everyone knows you're participating and will be able to stop by your page. (CLICK HERE TO FIND THE LINKY)

2.) On Monday March 7, post the first 550 words (or less) of your WIP on your blog. If you can, leave a link to your email address* in case someone has an especially long critique.
(*Suggested by Madeline of Capricious Existence!)

3.) Hop around on the 7th and 8th to spread the love to the other participants. Feel free to post an updated version after you've gotten some suggestions. Remember: The more comment love you give, the more will come back to you :)

4.) Be sure to leave a link back to THIS post so everyone can find the Linky. Also, this isn't required but I'd love you forever if you could mention this on your blog and/or host that nifty little button.

ALSO!!
On Wednesday March 9, I will choose one of the participants (at random) to recieve a $20 Amazon gift card!


Anyone who mentions my fest or hosts a button will be entered twice. Make sure to leave a link to that post in the comments section so I don't miss it!

If you sign up and don't post, you won't be in the drawing. Sorry, but it's only fair.