tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-355416373405474661.post7324178822830175251..comments2023-06-12T03:24:53.376-07:00Comments on The Lit Express: Story in a Rush: Under the BridgeRane Andersonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09885933926972080089noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-355416373405474661.post-12544809915312437652010-11-07T11:12:03.839-08:002010-11-07T11:12:03.839-08:00Thanks Linda! I think you're my number 1 fan. ...Thanks Linda! I think you're my number 1 fan. hahaRane Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09885933926972080089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-355416373405474661.post-82408206995772984202010-10-30T20:07:52.370-07:002010-10-30T20:07:52.370-07:00I can picture the boat drifting into the shadows u...I can picture the boat drifting into the shadows under the bridge. I can feel his lightheartedness in his laughter over the missed kiss, and her worry about the continuation of their relationship after he finds out she's from a different religious background. You really have a way with setting a scene. All in 100 words and easily incorporating the 5 given you. <br />I'd like to read an expanded version, answering questions like "how did they meet," and "what happened after she told him."Linda Wnoreply@blogger.com